People who in a lot of money in the lottery can improve their life. One reason if they can give better educationto their children for example if someone win the lottery he should probably put his children in a good school for example Markham, Lincoln, etc. Another reason if they can travel wherever they want , for instance if they want to travel to relax, they can choose the place and travel, also spend a lot of money if they want. Finally they can make a company for example they can invest their money to make a good company and earn more money in the future. I knew a person who won a money in a game well he investes his money to make a company, now he lives in la molina abd earn a lot of money because he didn't spend hid money in stupid things.
Pedro Antezana - I07
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thanks for your entry
People who in(win) a lot of money in the lottery can improve their life. One reason if they can give better educationto(education to) their children(,)for example if someone win the lottery he should probably put his children in a good school(,) for example Markham, Lincoln, etc. Another reason if they can travel wherever they want , for instance if they want to travel to relax, they can choose the place and travel, also spend a lot of money if they want. Finally they can make a company(,) for example they can invest their money to make a good company and earn more money in the future. I knew a person who won a money(don't use "a") in a game well he investes his money to make a company, now he lives in la molina abd(?) earn a lot of money because he didn't spend hid(his) money in stupid things.
Your writting is great and I really like it, your mistakes are the punctuation and when you finished to upload your writting you didn't check it because there're some wrong words and spellings. Take care
Cesar Huachin ^^,
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