Well people who win the lottery think that they are very lucky.Some people think about setting a big company and the have to think how the company could take off.
If the prize is won for younger people could exist many problems with the money, for example he wants to splurge his money in expensive things that he doesn’t need.
Therefore people like him are going bankrupt easily because they don’t know how they can invest their money.
A lot of people when win the lottery think about their future for example they think to have fun with their friends doing many thing like travel around the world or they would buy some thing for example a car or a mansion.
Well I think that majority of people when they win the lottery think about having fun or investing their money.
People who invest their money have a lot of benefits when they are older people; they are going to receive more money than other people so this is a rewarding for their investment.
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Well people who win the lottery(,)think that they are very lucky.Some people think about setting a big company and(is better to use then) the(they) have to think how the company could take off.
If the prize is won for younger people(,) (it) could problems with the money, for example he wants(people want) to splurge his(their) money in expensive things that he doesn’t(they don't) need.
Therefore people like him(them) are going bankrupt easily because they don’t know how they can invest their money.
A lot of people when win the lottery think about their future(,) for example they think to have fun with their friends doing many thing like travel around the world or they would buy some thing(something)(,) for example a car or a mansion.
Well I think that majority of people when they win the lottery(,) (they) think about having fun or investing their money.
People who invest their money have a lot of benefits when they are older people; they are going to receive more money than other people(,) so this is a rewarding for their investment.
Well your mistakes are more in the part of the punctuation so+ take care of that.
Jose Fiestas
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